* I know I'm supposed to be working on my WIP, which is why that stands for "work-in-progress," but I have had a hard week, and was just relaxing when the doorbell rings.
I open the door to find a rangy young man standing there, scruffy hat in hand, running his fingers through unruly black hair.
Me: Hello. How can I help you?
Him: Are you Mom?
Me: (squinting at him) Do I know you?
Him: (a slight look of disappointment crosses his face) Um, I, I guess we haven't met in the flesh, ma'am. (He sticks out his hand, then realizes there's a barrier between us, as I haven't opened the screen door yet. He pulls his hand back, then awkwardly lets it fall to his side.) My name is Elijah Marshall.
Me: Elijah? You're Lije Marshall?
Lije: The same, ma'am. My cousin Julia says her boys call you "Mom."
Me: (feeling more than a little flustered at my inability to recognize my character, and wondering a bit under what circumstances they chat) I'm sorry, Lije. I should have known you right off. (I open the screen door and wave him inside) Please come in. May I offer you a refreshment?
Lije: I could do with a drop of water, ma'am, er Mom.
Me: Sit down, please. I'll get it directly.
(Lije sits and looks for a place to set his hat. He ends up putting it on one knee as I leave the room to pump, er, retrieve a glass of water from the fridge)
Me: (entering the room) Here you are. You sure you won't take a bowl of ice cream?
Lije: No ma'am. Mom. (He downs the water and hands back the glass) Thank you. I'm in a bit of a hurry. Hans Stiles is looking for me.
Me: (answering reflectively). Hans Stiles. I renamed him, then?
Lije: Yes. That didn't improve his nature, though. He's still a bully.
Me: I'm sure that's causing you trouble.
Lije: Ah, yes ma'am. Mom. (hotly) He beat up my father! Now he aims to do the same thing to me.
Me: Are you afraid of him?
Lije: Cautious, Mom. Cautious. He has plenty of friends. We don't, now.
Me: You've lost friends?
Lije: You know we have. Folks hereabouts don't like Mormons. You'd think they hadn't known my folks for all those years.
Me: Indeed. In my time, there's a great threat to Christianity itself. Folks of faith need to put their past suspicions to rest and band together for the survival of us all. (waving my hand) Never mind that. Do you have a purpose in visiting me, Lije?
Lije: I do. (He looks around the room. I can tell he's hesitating) I understand you have picked a young lady for me to, ah, hmm, court.
Me: (trying to hide my smile at his nervousness) That's right. Do you have concerns?
Lije: Not about the young lady, Mom. I believe you've chosen wisely in the past, so I'll trust your judgement. My, um, concern is that you're not writing down the words fast enough to bring her nigh.
Me: (sighing) That's so. I was called for jury duty. (Lije has a puzzled look on his face. I remember that only men served on juries in his time) Never mind that. Another matter took time to resolve.
Lije: But you are anxious to continue? Writing down the account of my life, I mean.
Me: Yes, my dear, I am. I expect that by the time I tell my readers of your visit, I will have written a fair amount.
Lije: Your readers? You communicate with them? (His eyes grow huge)
Me: Yes, Lije. The wonders of my world far exceed your understanding. I won't try to explain a "blog" to you. (I stand) I think I'd better get to work on those words right now. Thank you for the visit.
Lije: (rising to his feet) Thank you. I appreciate your work, Mom. We all do.
Me: (thinking how sweet he is) Thank you for the reminder.
Lije goes out the door and down the ramp. As he turns the corner into the road, a mist covers him, and he is lost to view.
Copyright © 2015 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, Gone for a Soldier, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit marshaward.com or Westward Books.
From her home in the forest, writer Marsha Ward offers up an eclectic collage of musings on life, insights into the writing process, sample scenes and snippets from her work, book spotlights, and author interviews. Now including "The Characters in Marsha's Head."
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Monday, May 04, 2015
Friday, April 04, 2014
Gone for a Soldier - Cover Reveal
All good things come to those who wait...patiently!
I'm counting a lot of blessings lately, even as I remain frazzled over various issues in my life, like, um, taxes. Which I must get down to doing very soon.
Be that as it may, this post is a reward for those who have waited for a long, long time. Those who have stuck by me through thick and thin. My loyal readers, book buyers, and Street Team. My loyal family members who have encouraged me and helped me carry on, even as I continue to live life alone. Alone, but never lonely.
Remember the name of this blog? I know these characters like my own family. That's why I knew them the instant I set eyes upon this art work.
Yes, the couple is Rulon Owen and Mary Hilbrands, exactly as I've seen them in my mind's eye.
The incomparable Linda Boulanger of Tell~Tale Cover Designs has done it again!
Gone for a Soldier will be out later this summer, but I couldn't wait any longer to reveal the cover.
If you want to help me show it off, please contact me for additional blog materials at marshaward.az@gmail.com. In the meantime, feel free to Tweet, Share, Pin, etc., and help me get the word out that Rulon Owen and his brothers are going to war ... and they won't take any prisoners.
I'm counting a lot of blessings lately, even as I remain frazzled over various issues in my life, like, um, taxes. Which I must get down to doing very soon.
Be that as it may, this post is a reward for those who have waited for a long, long time. Those who have stuck by me through thick and thin. My loyal readers, book buyers, and Street Team. My loyal family members who have encouraged me and helped me carry on, even as I continue to live life alone. Alone, but never lonely.
Remember the name of this blog? I know these characters like my own family. That's why I knew them the instant I set eyes upon this art work.
Yes, the couple is Rulon Owen and Mary Hilbrands, exactly as I've seen them in my mind's eye.
The incomparable Linda Boulanger of Tell~Tale Cover Designs has done it again!
Gone for a Soldier will be out later this summer, but I couldn't wait any longer to reveal the cover.
If you want to help me show it off, please contact me for additional blog materials at marshaward.az@gmail.com. In the meantime, feel free to Tweet, Share, Pin, etc., and help me get the word out that Rulon Owen and his brothers are going to war ... and they won't take any prisoners.
Monday, March 03, 2014
Aaaaaaa! He's back!
James Owen, I mean. Here I haven't even finished the current novel, or the novella, or the short story, or the novel-not-from-this-series, and he's jumping in with both feet!
"¿No me amas?"
James Owen sat bolt upright and looked over at his sleeping wife, Jessie. She didn't, to his knowledge, speak in her sleep. Besides, the voice wasn't like hers. Not at all. He shivered in the July night air, heavy with heat.
Jessie's Spanish wasn't as fluid as that of the voice that had awakened him. He pondered a moment, rubbing the scar tissue in his side that sometimes pained him into wakefulness. Nothing hurt tonight. He looked at Jessie again, curled in a ball around her ripe belly.
A chill went down his spine. Six little beans! Amparo!
He slowly lay back, careful not to touch Jessie. "Not fair," he whispered, then repeated the thought in Spanish for his dead wife's benefit. "My livin' wife needs me now," he added.
"I live," she told him. "Solamente you cannot see me."
He let out a stuttering breath that seemed to come from his toes. "Te amo siempre." Afraid to wake Jessie, he moved the conversation back into his thoughts. I'll love you forever. You know that.
Here I am not your wife. I am soltera. Alone. Did you not make a promise to yourself? To me? To your God?
That's all I've got. Now leave me alone for a while, James. I have to sleep!
"¿No me amas?"
James Owen sat bolt upright and looked over at his sleeping wife, Jessie. She didn't, to his knowledge, speak in her sleep. Besides, the voice wasn't like hers. Not at all. He shivered in the July night air, heavy with heat.
Jessie's Spanish wasn't as fluid as that of the voice that had awakened him. He pondered a moment, rubbing the scar tissue in his side that sometimes pained him into wakefulness. Nothing hurt tonight. He looked at Jessie again, curled in a ball around her ripe belly.
A chill went down his spine. Six little beans! Amparo!
He slowly lay back, careful not to touch Jessie. "Not fair," he whispered, then repeated the thought in Spanish for his dead wife's benefit. "My livin' wife needs me now," he added.
"I live," she told him. "Solamente you cannot see me."
He let out a stuttering breath that seemed to come from his toes. "Te amo siempre." Afraid to wake Jessie, he moved the conversation back into his thoughts. I'll love you forever. You know that.
Here I am not your wife. I am soltera. Alone. Did you not make a promise to yourself? To me? To your God?
That's all I've got. Now leave me alone for a while, James. I have to sleep!
Monday, January 27, 2014
Mary Owen Comes to Call
* I knew I should be writing, but I had borne up through a hard week and found myself nodding over my computer keyboard.
That changed when the doorbell rang.
I went to answer it, and saw a young girl standing outside my screen door, wringing her hands. I saw immediately that she was not from my time. She wore a long skirted outfit, complete with a frilly scarf draped down the front of her bodice to below her waist.
Me: Hello?
Her: Are you "Mom?"
Me: Several people call me that.
Her: Rulon says that's what you agreed would be acceptable.
Me: Rulon said so? Are you Mary? (I certainly should have recognized her right away, but sometimes there things are tricky.)
Mary: Yes, I am Mary . . Owen.
Me: Come in, dear. You look a mite agitated.
Mary: Yes. (Her voice is so soft I have to strain to hear it.)
I opened the door and let her in, went through the amenities, and admired her scarf. She blushed.
Mary: It is to confuse to eye, you know. So folks won't . . .
Me: Won't?
Mary: Won't condemn me for being, you know, for increasing.
Me: Who would be so impolite as to cast aspersions on you? You're married, yes?
Mary: Some folks believe I'm too young for that.
Me: Isn't that between you and Rulon?
Mary, brightening: Rulon. Yes. (She rests a hand on her abdomen, smiling shyly.) But he is gone, you know.
Me: Off fighting. I do know.
Mary (hastily): But you won't make him die?
Me (shaking my head emphatically): No.
Mary, sighing: Thank you.
Me (not knowing what else to say): Are you well?
Mary: Yes. Very. Thank you. Except that . . .
Me: Yes?
Mary: I have lost something. (She is hanging her head now.)
Me: Rulon's letter?
Mary: Yes. I cannot find it anywhere. Please let me find it.
Me: Mary. Look at me. (She glances up.) You will come upon that letter in a while. Not tomorrow, but after a while.
Mary: But I will be able to read it?
Me: Of course. It will please you to do so.
Mary (rising) I don't know how to reward your generosity, ma'am.
Me: There's no need, dear. Just go play out your role and have a happy life. (I give her a hug)
Mary: Thank you, ma'am. Mom.
I watch as she moves cautiously away, down the ramp and onto the road, and then out of sight.
Copyright © 2014 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com or Westward Books.
That changed when the doorbell rang.
I went to answer it, and saw a young girl standing outside my screen door, wringing her hands. I saw immediately that she was not from my time. She wore a long skirted outfit, complete with a frilly scarf draped down the front of her bodice to below her waist.
Me: Hello?
Her: Are you "Mom?"
Me: Several people call me that.
Her: Rulon says that's what you agreed would be acceptable.
Me: Rulon said so? Are you Mary? (I certainly should have recognized her right away, but sometimes there things are tricky.)
Mary: Yes, I am Mary . . Owen.
Me: Come in, dear. You look a mite agitated.
Mary: Yes. (Her voice is so soft I have to strain to hear it.)
I opened the door and let her in, went through the amenities, and admired her scarf. She blushed.
Mary: It is to confuse to eye, you know. So folks won't . . .
Me: Won't?
Mary: Won't condemn me for being, you know, for increasing.
Me: Who would be so impolite as to cast aspersions on you? You're married, yes?
Mary: Some folks believe I'm too young for that.
Me: Isn't that between you and Rulon?
Mary, brightening: Rulon. Yes. (She rests a hand on her abdomen, smiling shyly.) But he is gone, you know.
Me: Off fighting. I do know.
Mary (hastily): But you won't make him die?
Me (shaking my head emphatically): No.
Mary, sighing: Thank you.
Me (not knowing what else to say): Are you well?
Mary: Yes. Very. Thank you. Except that . . .
Me: Yes?
Mary: I have lost something. (She is hanging her head now.)
Me: Rulon's letter?
Mary: Yes. I cannot find it anywhere. Please let me find it.
Me: Mary. Look at me. (She glances up.) You will come upon that letter in a while. Not tomorrow, but after a while.
Mary: But I will be able to read it?
Me: Of course. It will please you to do so.
Mary (rising) I don't know how to reward your generosity, ma'am.
Me: There's no need, dear. Just go play out your role and have a happy life. (I give her a hug)
Mary: Thank you, ma'am. Mom.
I watch as she moves cautiously away, down the ramp and onto the road, and then out of sight.
Copyright © 2014 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com or Westward Books.
Wednesday, August 14, 2013
Ella Ruth is Contrite *
After working in a hot office all afternoon, I sat with my front door open and a fan circulating the cooler outside air as I caught up on recorded reruns of The Closer. When my security light went on, I looked over to see if a deer was crossing my lot, but nothing was apparent, so I went back to the episode.
A few moments later, a movement caught my eye, and I glanced over to see the figure of a young woman standing in the light. She was dressed in an outfit with a long, bell-shaped skirt, so I knew immediately that one of my characters had come to visit.
Turning off the TV, I approach the door. The blonde girl with the anguished features appears to be Ella Ruth Allen, whom I had chased away previously after her outrageous behavior toward me. I'm not sure I want her in my house again, so I hesitate before greeting her. After a long moment, I succumb to Christian principles and speak.
Me: Yes? (I know. A bit short, but at least I sound half-way civil.)
Ella Ruth (in a shaky voice): Ma'am. I know I behaved badly on our previous acquaintance, and I am sorry for my ill-mannered comportment. May I come in? I am so worried.
Me (unlocking and opening the screen door): Worried? With a rich, influential pappa?
I perform the usual ceremonies of getting her seated and asking if she requires anything to eat as she dithers, making polite replies and little gasping noises. I understand the mental electrical storm that creates a condition of dithering, and become more kindly disposed toward her.
Me: What brings you to my door, Miss Ella Ruth?
Ella Ruth: Benjamin. (She begins to cry, and I bring out the box of tissue and hand it over. She wipes her eyes and begins to rush through a blubbering account.) He gave me an ultimatum and I rejected him. I did not think he was seriously planning to talk to my pappa so plainly and dash my dreams so rudely. I said some unkind words and turned on my heel and left him. Then he left me!
Her wail of distress seems genuine enough. I dredge through my memory, and recall that when Ben came to visit me, I had not finished writing the scene that occurred behind the mill. I did so later. The scene had indeed progressed as she outlined.
Me: Well. That is unfortunate. What does he write to you?
Ella Ruth: Ma'am, he does not write. Not a word. I do not know if he has been in a battle, or injured, or fallen prey to illness, like I hear other men have. He went in my own cousin's infantry company, but I hear nothing from George, either. Please ma'am, what am I to do?
Me (somewhat flummoxed): What are you to do? What do you want from him?
Ella Ruth: Oh ma'am, I want to know that he is well and sound. I bear him such a great deal of affection. My heart is sunk low to know that we parted on unfriendly terms.
Me: It sounds like you need to re-establish a connection with him. Have you asked his mother for news?
Ella Ruth (uncertainly): Mrs. Owen? Mrs. Julia Owen?
Me: The very one. If anyone has heard from Ben, it will be her.
Ella Ruth: Oh ma'am, she will not bear kindness toward me. I am sure of it.
Me: Then you have already approached her?
Ella Ruth (in a tiny voice): No. Ma'am. I am frightened of her.
Me: You're frightened by the kindest woman in the Valley?
Ella Ruth: She is formidable, ma'am.
Me: No she isn't. I've written her as a kind, giving soul. She is really very pleasant, very easy to know.
Ella Ruth: She will heed Ben's plight before my own, ma'am.
Me (feeling the disbelieving expression on my face): You really should talk to her, Miss Allen. Straight out.
Ella Ruth: May I not approach the new Missus Owen? The new bride at Hilbrands' store?
Me: Mistress Mary? What does she have to do with this?
Ella Ruth: Perhaps she will be amenable to asking Mrs. Owen for news of Benjamin.
Me (sighing): That way is quite roundabout, Miss Allen. I see that is your plan, however. Suit yourself. Ask Mary for help. You can only hope her happiness will color her response to you.
Ella Ruth: Her response?
Me: New brides often wish to share their happiness and help others achieve some for themselves, as well. You might find yourself fortunate. It just seems like such an involved and convoluted way of gaining news about Ben.
Ella Ruth: Miss, um, Mistress Mary is closer in age to me. I believe I can talk to her, persuade her to help me.
Me (rising and spreading my hands in acceptance): Like I said, suit yourself. Good evening, Miss Allen.
She leaves, and a bolt of lightning sears the sky. I wait for the thunder, but it rumbles in the distance, and I go back to my television watching, a tense feeling squeezing my abdomen. What will come of Ella Ruth's plan?
Copyright © 2013 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com or Westward Books.
A few moments later, a movement caught my eye, and I glanced over to see the figure of a young woman standing in the light. She was dressed in an outfit with a long, bell-shaped skirt, so I knew immediately that one of my characters had come to visit.
Turning off the TV, I approach the door. The blonde girl with the anguished features appears to be Ella Ruth Allen, whom I had chased away previously after her outrageous behavior toward me. I'm not sure I want her in my house again, so I hesitate before greeting her. After a long moment, I succumb to Christian principles and speak.
Me: Yes? (I know. A bit short, but at least I sound half-way civil.)
Ella Ruth (in a shaky voice): Ma'am. I know I behaved badly on our previous acquaintance, and I am sorry for my ill-mannered comportment. May I come in? I am so worried.
Me (unlocking and opening the screen door): Worried? With a rich, influential pappa?
I perform the usual ceremonies of getting her seated and asking if she requires anything to eat as she dithers, making polite replies and little gasping noises. I understand the mental electrical storm that creates a condition of dithering, and become more kindly disposed toward her.
Me: What brings you to my door, Miss Ella Ruth?
Ella Ruth: Benjamin. (She begins to cry, and I bring out the box of tissue and hand it over. She wipes her eyes and begins to rush through a blubbering account.) He gave me an ultimatum and I rejected him. I did not think he was seriously planning to talk to my pappa so plainly and dash my dreams so rudely. I said some unkind words and turned on my heel and left him. Then he left me!
Her wail of distress seems genuine enough. I dredge through my memory, and recall that when Ben came to visit me, I had not finished writing the scene that occurred behind the mill. I did so later. The scene had indeed progressed as she outlined.
Me: Well. That is unfortunate. What does he write to you?
Ella Ruth: Ma'am, he does not write. Not a word. I do not know if he has been in a battle, or injured, or fallen prey to illness, like I hear other men have. He went in my own cousin's infantry company, but I hear nothing from George, either. Please ma'am, what am I to do?
Me (somewhat flummoxed): What are you to do? What do you want from him?
Ella Ruth: Oh ma'am, I want to know that he is well and sound. I bear him such a great deal of affection. My heart is sunk low to know that we parted on unfriendly terms.
Me: It sounds like you need to re-establish a connection with him. Have you asked his mother for news?
Ella Ruth (uncertainly): Mrs. Owen? Mrs. Julia Owen?
Me: The very one. If anyone has heard from Ben, it will be her.
Ella Ruth: Oh ma'am, she will not bear kindness toward me. I am sure of it.
Me: Then you have already approached her?
Ella Ruth (in a tiny voice): No. Ma'am. I am frightened of her.
Me: You're frightened by the kindest woman in the Valley?
Ella Ruth: She is formidable, ma'am.
Me: No she isn't. I've written her as a kind, giving soul. She is really very pleasant, very easy to know.
Ella Ruth: She will heed Ben's plight before my own, ma'am.
Me (feeling the disbelieving expression on my face): You really should talk to her, Miss Allen. Straight out.
Ella Ruth: May I not approach the new Missus Owen? The new bride at Hilbrands' store?
Me: Mistress Mary? What does she have to do with this?
Ella Ruth: Perhaps she will be amenable to asking Mrs. Owen for news of Benjamin.
Me (sighing): That way is quite roundabout, Miss Allen. I see that is your plan, however. Suit yourself. Ask Mary for help. You can only hope her happiness will color her response to you.
Ella Ruth: Her response?
Me: New brides often wish to share their happiness and help others achieve some for themselves, as well. You might find yourself fortunate. It just seems like such an involved and convoluted way of gaining news about Ben.
Ella Ruth: Miss, um, Mistress Mary is closer in age to me. I believe I can talk to her, persuade her to help me.
Me (rising and spreading my hands in acceptance): Like I said, suit yourself. Good evening, Miss Allen.
She leaves, and a bolt of lightning sears the sky. I wait for the thunder, but it rumbles in the distance, and I go back to my television watching, a tense feeling squeezing my abdomen. What will come of Ella Ruth's plan?
Copyright © 2013 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com or Westward Books.
Wednesday, July 24, 2013
Ella Ruth is Furious!
The day was rainy, and since I'd been up late the night/morning before, I decided to take a little nap and enjoy the natural cool while the rain saturated the air and fell on the thirsty earth.
I awoke to a steady banging on my front door. Good grief, I thought. It can't be a wildfire with all this moisture. Not sure why else someone would make all that racket, I hurried to the door and flung it open.
Fuzzy as I was with sleep, I was confused to be confronted by a slight young woman dressed in 19th-century finery. I know I frowned, but her face already bore that expression, her mouth down-turned and her eyebrows drawn together, which made unflattering lines on her face.
Me (blurting the words): Who are you?
Her (angry, angry, angry): You know who I am! You said I'm spoiled. I never heard the like. I've half a mind to tell my father how to get here to deal with you, you wicked . . .(her voice peters out as she takes a breath.)
Me (half-offended, but stoic): Oh. Ella Ruth Allen. So Ben spilled the beans.
Ella Ruth: I do not know what that means.
Me: It means Benjamin told you about our conversation.
Ella Ruth (in a prissy tone): No. He did not have to do that.
Me: What do you mean?
Ella Ruth: I followed him last week, and learned his secret, his little rainbow trick. All I had to do was stand beside the rainbow and listen.
Me (speechless)
Ella Ruth (snorting at what must have been my astounded face): You writer people think you can keep us in the dark. Well, it did not serve you well to keep the rainbow entrance secret. I will let my father know about you and your vile ways.
Me: Your father hasn't made an appearance. He does not exist yet.
Ella Ruth (glares at me)
Me (narrowing my eyes at her.): Perhaps this writer person will not put him into a scene at all. Then he will never exist. How about them apples, missy?
Ella Ruth: Humph!
Me (pointing down the ramp): Get off my porch.
Ella Ruth swirls her skirts angrily and starts down the ramp to disappear into the misty rain.
Me (muttering): I'm going to get a lock for that rainbow!
Copyright © 2013 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com or Westward Books.
I awoke to a steady banging on my front door. Good grief, I thought. It can't be a wildfire with all this moisture. Not sure why else someone would make all that racket, I hurried to the door and flung it open.
Fuzzy as I was with sleep, I was confused to be confronted by a slight young woman dressed in 19th-century finery. I know I frowned, but her face already bore that expression, her mouth down-turned and her eyebrows drawn together, which made unflattering lines on her face.
Me (blurting the words): Who are you?
Her (angry, angry, angry): You know who I am! You said I'm spoiled. I never heard the like. I've half a mind to tell my father how to get here to deal with you, you wicked . . .(her voice peters out as she takes a breath.)
Me (half-offended, but stoic): Oh. Ella Ruth Allen. So Ben spilled the beans.
Ella Ruth: I do not know what that means.
Me: It means Benjamin told you about our conversation.
Ella Ruth (in a prissy tone): No. He did not have to do that.
Me: What do you mean?
Ella Ruth: I followed him last week, and learned his secret, his little rainbow trick. All I had to do was stand beside the rainbow and listen.
Me (speechless)
Ella Ruth (snorting at what must have been my astounded face): You writer people think you can keep us in the dark. Well, it did not serve you well to keep the rainbow entrance secret. I will let my father know about you and your vile ways.
Me: Your father hasn't made an appearance. He does not exist yet.
Ella Ruth (glares at me)
Me (narrowing my eyes at her.): Perhaps this writer person will not put him into a scene at all. Then he will never exist. How about them apples, missy?
Ella Ruth: Humph!
Me (pointing down the ramp): Get off my porch.
Ella Ruth swirls her skirts angrily and starts down the ramp to disappear into the misty rain.
Me (muttering): I'm going to get a lock for that rainbow!
Copyright © 2013 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com or Westward Books.
Wednesday, July 17, 2013
Ben Owen follows the rainbow
Shortly after I posted a video on Facebook of the gully washer we had yesterday, I sat on my deck to enjoy the cool air. I'm not sure if I nodded off or what, but when I raise my head and open my eyes, a young man sits across the table from me.
He notes my alarm and hastens to assure me that he means no harm, calling me "Mom," and saying he is Benjamin Owen.
I should have known him right off, although he hadn't come visiting before now. He resembles his younger brother, Carl. Or maybe I have that turned around, and should say Carl looks like Ben.
When my breathing regularizes, I become curious about the reason for Ben's visit. Usually, my characters come to urge me to tell their story, but I'm in the midst of doing just that with Rulon Owen, and to a lesser degree, with Ben.
Me: I'm glad to make your acquaintance, Ben.
Ben (eyeing me speculatively): Are you now, Mom?
Me: Indeed.
Ben: Rulon's gettin' the bulk of the words you write. Sometimes I feel a mite cast aside.
Me: This is the first draft, Ben, and I'm jumping around a lot, and writing out-of-order scenes with this novel. Be patient.
Ben (squirming a bit in his chair): I ain't a patient man. Ella Ruth can attest to that.
Me (arching an eyebrow in my best imitation of Randolph Hilbrands): You're much like Rulon in that area. You take care. I don't want to add a tragic subplot about an unwed mother.
Ben (rising to his feet): Unwed mother! I wouldn't-- Well, I'm sorely tempted, but I'd druther not face Ma's fury on that head. She would flail the skin off my bones, she would.
Me (signaling him to be seated): Then control your passions. Don't meet the girl in private. Keep to crowds when she's with you.
Ben: That wasn't my idea, there behind the mill. She crept up on me. Surprised me.
Me: Don't let it happen again.
Ben (hanging his head): She makes it difficult. A body would think, well, it would almost appear she . . . (his voice trails off)
Me: Ben, she's more than a little bit spoiled. She expects to get anything she desires. (I look pointedly at him.) She desires you, but wrapped around her little finger and doing her utmost bidding.
Ben: I get that same feeling, ma'am. I recall that speech she spoke me about the suit she expects me to wear for her dream weddin'! I can't afford such outlandish trappings, nor would I buy them if I could. But ma'am, Mom, how my body does betray me whenever I get a whiff of that good-smellin' perfume she wears!
Me: Benjamin, you must strive to be the good Christian gentleman your mother raised you up to be. Strong. Mannerly. Celibate. (I stress my final word.)
Ben (groans): Ma does have her standards. (He looks at me searchingly.) Did Rulon--
Me: No, he didn't. I expect you to be the consummate Southern gentleman, as well. I have my standards, too.
Ben (seeming to grit his teeth between halting phrases): Then I will . . . give my most . . . fervent efforts toward that end, Mom.
Me: You will keep yourself in hand?
Ben: Help me. Don't let Ella Ruth, ah, ambush me again.
Me (quirking an eyebrow): Fervent efforts, Ben. Fervent efforts.
The sun comes out, and he's gone.
Copyright © 2013 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com or Westward Books.
He notes my alarm and hastens to assure me that he means no harm, calling me "Mom," and saying he is Benjamin Owen.
I should have known him right off, although he hadn't come visiting before now. He resembles his younger brother, Carl. Or maybe I have that turned around, and should say Carl looks like Ben.
When my breathing regularizes, I become curious about the reason for Ben's visit. Usually, my characters come to urge me to tell their story, but I'm in the midst of doing just that with Rulon Owen, and to a lesser degree, with Ben.
Me: I'm glad to make your acquaintance, Ben.
Ben (eyeing me speculatively): Are you now, Mom?
Me: Indeed.
Ben: Rulon's gettin' the bulk of the words you write. Sometimes I feel a mite cast aside.
Me: This is the first draft, Ben, and I'm jumping around a lot, and writing out-of-order scenes with this novel. Be patient.
Ben (squirming a bit in his chair): I ain't a patient man. Ella Ruth can attest to that.
Me (arching an eyebrow in my best imitation of Randolph Hilbrands): You're much like Rulon in that area. You take care. I don't want to add a tragic subplot about an unwed mother.
Ben (rising to his feet): Unwed mother! I wouldn't-- Well, I'm sorely tempted, but I'd druther not face Ma's fury on that head. She would flail the skin off my bones, she would.
Me (signaling him to be seated): Then control your passions. Don't meet the girl in private. Keep to crowds when she's with you.
Ben: That wasn't my idea, there behind the mill. She crept up on me. Surprised me.
Me: Don't let it happen again.
Ben (hanging his head): She makes it difficult. A body would think, well, it would almost appear she . . . (his voice trails off)
Me: Ben, she's more than a little bit spoiled. She expects to get anything she desires. (I look pointedly at him.) She desires you, but wrapped around her little finger and doing her utmost bidding.
Ben: I get that same feeling, ma'am. I recall that speech she spoke me about the suit she expects me to wear for her dream weddin'! I can't afford such outlandish trappings, nor would I buy them if I could. But ma'am, Mom, how my body does betray me whenever I get a whiff of that good-smellin' perfume she wears!
Me: Benjamin, you must strive to be the good Christian gentleman your mother raised you up to be. Strong. Mannerly. Celibate. (I stress my final word.)
Ben (groans): Ma does have her standards. (He looks at me searchingly.) Did Rulon--
Me: No, he didn't. I expect you to be the consummate Southern gentleman, as well. I have my standards, too.
Ben (seeming to grit his teeth between halting phrases): Then I will . . . give my most . . . fervent efforts toward that end, Mom.
Me: You will keep yourself in hand?
Ben: Help me. Don't let Ella Ruth, ah, ambush me again.
Me (quirking an eyebrow): Fervent efforts, Ben. Fervent efforts.
The sun comes out, and he's gone.
Copyright © 2013 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com or Westward Books.
Sunday, April 07, 2013
Rulon Owen Visits Me Again
I decided to take a power nap after a very edifying, but exhausting, weekend. As I dozed, Rulon Owen showed up. I let him in the door, seated him, and performed the amenities. He wasn't interested in food or drink.
Me: Should you be here?
Rulon (his face coloring): Perhaps not, but I won't stay long. I need to give you my thanks for beginnin' my tale. It is . . . easier now to go on.
Me (studying his face): You are going to have a hard time over the next few years.
Rulon: Years? It won't take years to give the Yankees their comeuppance!
Me: I live now. I know a few things.
Rulon: Hmm. You have a point. (He seems abashed.)
Me: I will bring you through it, but expect hard things.
Rulon: Thank you for the warning words. (He tilts his head.) I am a mite chagrinned to see myself as you see me.
Me (not sure if I should grin or not. Thinking better of it.): You're young and strong, and have plenty of vitality.
Rulon (quirking an eyebrow): I am a lustful dog.
Me (tilting my head): That too. I hope getting married helped.
Rulon (mouth twitching. I don't know whether to expect a frown, or what. Finally, he chooses to share a huge grin.): It did.
Me: Good. Now go to war. Get that out of your system.
Rulon: You make it seem like a rite of passage.
Me: In a way, it is. You'll be fine, but don't expect it to be easy, you hear?
Rulon (sobering): You will take care of Mary?
Me (nodding): I will. (I rise to my feet, not knowing where Mary is waiting, not wanting her to wait long.) Expect hard times.
Rulon (rising, his face cautious): You've said that four times, now. You won't tell me details?
Me: No. Go back to your wife. Your time with her now is short.
Rulon. Don't I know it! Thank you, Mom.
And he's gone.
Copyright © 2013 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com.
Me: Should you be here?
Rulon (his face coloring): Perhaps not, but I won't stay long. I need to give you my thanks for beginnin' my tale. It is . . . easier now to go on.
Me (studying his face): You are going to have a hard time over the next few years.
Rulon: Years? It won't take years to give the Yankees their comeuppance!
Me: I live now. I know a few things.
Rulon: Hmm. You have a point. (He seems abashed.)
Me: I will bring you through it, but expect hard things.
Rulon: Thank you for the warning words. (He tilts his head.) I am a mite chagrinned to see myself as you see me.
Me (not sure if I should grin or not. Thinking better of it.): You're young and strong, and have plenty of vitality.
Rulon (quirking an eyebrow): I am a lustful dog.
Me (tilting my head): That too. I hope getting married helped.
Rulon (mouth twitching. I don't know whether to expect a frown, or what. Finally, he chooses to share a huge grin.): It did.
Me: Good. Now go to war. Get that out of your system.
Rulon: You make it seem like a rite of passage.
Me: In a way, it is. You'll be fine, but don't expect it to be easy, you hear?
Rulon (sobering): You will take care of Mary?
Me (nodding): I will. (I rise to my feet, not knowing where Mary is waiting, not wanting her to wait long.) Expect hard times.
Rulon (rising, his face cautious): You've said that four times, now. You won't tell me details?
Me: No. Go back to your wife. Your time with her now is short.
Rulon. Don't I know it! Thank you, Mom.
And he's gone.
Copyright © 2013 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com.
Thursday, February 14, 2013
Rulon Owen is Not a Patient Man
I'm outside, slogging through the snow to the garbage can I've stashed on the other side of the road for the winter so I don't have to move it back and forth during periods when the half-dollar size granite rocks are covered ankle-deep with snow. Truth be told, I don't like to trundle the bin over the granite rocks, either. Good thing the cross-road neighbors don't visit very often, I think, hauling my plastic bags by their pull ties to the black monstrosity.
"Looks like you could use a hand," someone behind me says in a deep voice, causing me to nearly jump out of my skin.
I whirl around the best I can with two heavy bags impeding my pirouette. My heart pounds as hard as it did the last time someone told me Sean Connery had fallen to his death from a crag in New Zealand.
A grey-hatted man sits astride a reddish horse that nickers softly, its breath streaming from its nostrils like steam escaping from a broken pipe. I back up as the man swings down from the saddle and drops the reins to ground-tie the animal.
"Who are you?" I ask, my voice quavering ever so slightly. I don't tote a firearm with me when I take out the garbage. Maybe that should change.
"Mom," he says, relieving me of first one bag, then the other. "You've met me. You should know me by now."
I'm a bit rattled by his choice of words. My sons call me "Mom" in just that impatient tone of voice, making more than one syllable out of the word.
My mind is jumping from one compartment of my brain to another, rattling the filing cabinet drawers I jerk open as I search for clues to help me remember this man.
"I'm younger," he says, turning away from me to study the garbage bin.
Cole? Bob? John? Jim? No. He doesn't resemble the outlaw Younger brothers. My gosh, who is he? I'm beginning to slip into fear.
He sets the bags on the ground and bends his head sideways to examine the lip of the black lid. He raises an arm to test it. Discovering that it moves, he thrusts it upward, and the lid flies back. He chuckles. I'm moving backward, puzzled by his actions. He picks up the bags, chucks them in the bin, closes the lid, and turns to me, dusting his hands together.
"Them parcels have a slippery feel, but the keg is harder. What do you call that material?"
When he raises his hand to tilt back his hat, I finally know him.
"Rulon," I exhale. Rod Owen's oldest boy, and he's much more boyish looking than the man I'd met a couple of years ago. "Plastic. They are both made of plastic, but different types."
"Humph," he snorts. "Plastic."
"You'd best come inside," I tell him, glancing at the horse, and wondering if it's better to tie it to the rail of the back-door deck or the ramp's railing. The back door is locked, but I don't want the horse destroying my Heat Trak electric mat, so I settle for a third choice, the railing on the covered deck closest to the shed. That will hide the animal sufficiently that someone won't come along and elect to take a joy-ride.
Rulon ties the horse where I tell him to, then wipes off his boots before entering my living room.
"Sit down and take your ease," I say, lapsing into a genteel Civil War-era-matron persona. "May I get you a refreshment?" I mentally go over the contents of my refrigerator and cupboards. "I can offer you water, mint tea, pineapple juice...." I stop as his brow contorts in confusion. "Never mind the pineapple juice. How about hot chocolate?" I shiver. "That seems a good choice. I also have a loaf cake."
Rulon sits, perched uneasily on the edge of my chair. "I believe I've tasted that 'hot chocolate' somewhere. Don't it take quite a time to brew it?"
I think of the luxury we have in our time. Instant beverages from a foil package. "No, this is special," I say. "It won't take very long. Will you take cake, as well?"
"I reckon," he says. "Thank you, Mom."
I leave him alone, knowing he's not even going to offer to assist me in preparing the repast. That is a woman's work, and Rulon is decidedly not a woman.
He's more handsome than I had remembered, full of face and not worn down by privation. He wasn't cautious in moving his body. "He hasn't been hit by shrapnel yet," I whisper, the truth dawning on me. This is the pre-war Rulon.
When I enter the room again, carrying a tray with cups of hot chocolate and plates of cake, I notice he's fidgeting, flicking one thumbnail with the other and biting his lower lip. I set down the tray and serve him.
He samples the chocolate, but it's hot and he blows on it.
"Tell me about the family," I say. I want to know the timeline I'm dealing with.
"Ma and Pa are well. Brother Ben's got himself a job at the mill." He grinned. "He's sparkin' Ella Ruth Meems. Figures to marry her right soon." He sips at the beverage.
My heart contracts, squeezing hard. I don't know Ella Ruth. I imagine I'll get to know her this year, probably too intimately for comfort.
"And you?" I manage to ask, forcing my lips into a smile. "You're getting long in the tooth and not wed yet."
"I am not," he sputters. "I mean, I aim to marry, just as soon..." His voice fades as his head drops. He tries to mask his chagrin by chugging the chocolate, but it's still hot, and he sputters anew, then coughs.
I hand him a tissue. He looks at it coldly, then sets his drink down on the table and wipes his mouth. He nibbles at the cake.
"Rulon, are you seeing someone?"
"Yes!" He barks the word. "Yes," he repeats, and breathes heavily. "I come to ask you to get on with writin' my tale."
He's rushing his words now, spilling them out so fast I feel obliged to stop him, but I can't, not yet.
"I'm forbidden to wed her until you write out the words and make it real. I can scarcely stand this waiting, waiting, everlasting waiting. She won't let me--"
"Rulon!" I cut him off. "You can't do that."
He's breathing hard now, nearly gasping with pain. His yearning is almost palpable, his drive to possess filling my room with the musk of desire, and I won't tolerate the dark aspect of his need.
"Get yourself in hand! Of course she won't permit you taking liberties. She's only a bit of a girl, and doesn't realize how she's pushing you to your limit."
"You know that?" he groans and narrows his brows as he gazes at me. "You know her?" He moves one leg awkwardly.
I acknowledge his distress. "I think you'd best stay the night here. I'll call my neighbor about sheltering your horse."
He slumps forward, nerveless, and I am glad he has set down the chocolate. "I'm a cur," he whispers, then groans again.
"No, you're a young man full of yourself. It will do you good to be removed from Mary for a while."
He shuts his eyes and compresses his lips, then nods slowly. "I'll stop here for the night, on one condition." He looks up at me, his eyes full of challenge. "You have to start writin' down the words."
Now it's my turn to nod. "I'll begin inside of a month."
Copyright © 2013 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com.
"Looks like you could use a hand," someone behind me says in a deep voice, causing me to nearly jump out of my skin.
I whirl around the best I can with two heavy bags impeding my pirouette. My heart pounds as hard as it did the last time someone told me Sean Connery had fallen to his death from a crag in New Zealand.
A grey-hatted man sits astride a reddish horse that nickers softly, its breath streaming from its nostrils like steam escaping from a broken pipe. I back up as the man swings down from the saddle and drops the reins to ground-tie the animal.
"Who are you?" I ask, my voice quavering ever so slightly. I don't tote a firearm with me when I take out the garbage. Maybe that should change.
"Mom," he says, relieving me of first one bag, then the other. "You've met me. You should know me by now."
I'm a bit rattled by his choice of words. My sons call me "Mom" in just that impatient tone of voice, making more than one syllable out of the word.
My mind is jumping from one compartment of my brain to another, rattling the filing cabinet drawers I jerk open as I search for clues to help me remember this man.
"I'm younger," he says, turning away from me to study the garbage bin.
Cole? Bob? John? Jim? No. He doesn't resemble the outlaw Younger brothers. My gosh, who is he? I'm beginning to slip into fear.
He sets the bags on the ground and bends his head sideways to examine the lip of the black lid. He raises an arm to test it. Discovering that it moves, he thrusts it upward, and the lid flies back. He chuckles. I'm moving backward, puzzled by his actions. He picks up the bags, chucks them in the bin, closes the lid, and turns to me, dusting his hands together.
"Them parcels have a slippery feel, but the keg is harder. What do you call that material?"
When he raises his hand to tilt back his hat, I finally know him.
"Rulon," I exhale. Rod Owen's oldest boy, and he's much more boyish looking than the man I'd met a couple of years ago. "Plastic. They are both made of plastic, but different types."
"Humph," he snorts. "Plastic."
"You'd best come inside," I tell him, glancing at the horse, and wondering if it's better to tie it to the rail of the back-door deck or the ramp's railing. The back door is locked, but I don't want the horse destroying my Heat Trak electric mat, so I settle for a third choice, the railing on the covered deck closest to the shed. That will hide the animal sufficiently that someone won't come along and elect to take a joy-ride.
Rulon ties the horse where I tell him to, then wipes off his boots before entering my living room.
"Sit down and take your ease," I say, lapsing into a genteel Civil War-era-matron persona. "May I get you a refreshment?" I mentally go over the contents of my refrigerator and cupboards. "I can offer you water, mint tea, pineapple juice...." I stop as his brow contorts in confusion. "Never mind the pineapple juice. How about hot chocolate?" I shiver. "That seems a good choice. I also have a loaf cake."
Rulon sits, perched uneasily on the edge of my chair. "I believe I've tasted that 'hot chocolate' somewhere. Don't it take quite a time to brew it?"
I think of the luxury we have in our time. Instant beverages from a foil package. "No, this is special," I say. "It won't take very long. Will you take cake, as well?"
"I reckon," he says. "Thank you, Mom."
I leave him alone, knowing he's not even going to offer to assist me in preparing the repast. That is a woman's work, and Rulon is decidedly not a woman.
He's more handsome than I had remembered, full of face and not worn down by privation. He wasn't cautious in moving his body. "He hasn't been hit by shrapnel yet," I whisper, the truth dawning on me. This is the pre-war Rulon.
When I enter the room again, carrying a tray with cups of hot chocolate and plates of cake, I notice he's fidgeting, flicking one thumbnail with the other and biting his lower lip. I set down the tray and serve him.
He samples the chocolate, but it's hot and he blows on it.
"Tell me about the family," I say. I want to know the timeline I'm dealing with.
"Ma and Pa are well. Brother Ben's got himself a job at the mill." He grinned. "He's sparkin' Ella Ruth Meems. Figures to marry her right soon." He sips at the beverage.
My heart contracts, squeezing hard. I don't know Ella Ruth. I imagine I'll get to know her this year, probably too intimately for comfort.
"And you?" I manage to ask, forcing my lips into a smile. "You're getting long in the tooth and not wed yet."
"I am not," he sputters. "I mean, I aim to marry, just as soon..." His voice fades as his head drops. He tries to mask his chagrin by chugging the chocolate, but it's still hot, and he sputters anew, then coughs.
I hand him a tissue. He looks at it coldly, then sets his drink down on the table and wipes his mouth. He nibbles at the cake.
"Rulon, are you seeing someone?"
"Yes!" He barks the word. "Yes," he repeats, and breathes heavily. "I come to ask you to get on with writin' my tale."
He's rushing his words now, spilling them out so fast I feel obliged to stop him, but I can't, not yet.
"I'm forbidden to wed her until you write out the words and make it real. I can scarcely stand this waiting, waiting, everlasting waiting. She won't let me--"
"Rulon!" I cut him off. "You can't do that."
He's breathing hard now, nearly gasping with pain. His yearning is almost palpable, his drive to possess filling my room with the musk of desire, and I won't tolerate the dark aspect of his need.
"Get yourself in hand! Of course she won't permit you taking liberties. She's only a bit of a girl, and doesn't realize how she's pushing you to your limit."
"You know that?" he groans and narrows his brows as he gazes at me. "You know her?" He moves one leg awkwardly.
I acknowledge his distress. "I think you'd best stay the night here. I'll call my neighbor about sheltering your horse."
He slumps forward, nerveless, and I am glad he has set down the chocolate. "I'm a cur," he whispers, then groans again.
"No, you're a young man full of yourself. It will do you good to be removed from Mary for a while."
He shuts his eyes and compresses his lips, then nods slowly. "I'll stop here for the night, on one condition." He looks up at me, his eyes full of challenge. "You have to start writin' down the words."
Now it's my turn to nod. "I'll begin inside of a month."
Copyright © 2013 Marsha Ward
*This is a work of fiction. I don't really talk to time-traveling characters from my novels. I do like them a lot, though, and am glad they pass under the rainbow from time to time to visit me in my own time and place. To order autographed copies of my novels, The Man from Shenandoah, Ride to Raton, Trail of Storms, and Spinster's Folly, visit my website at marshaward.com.
Friday, November 30, 2012
Marie Owen is glowing now
I'm feeling a bit down today, with a crick in my neck and a chill starting up my back. I jump as the doorbell rings, then a sharp series of knocks begins on my door, and I pry myself out of the chair to answer it. Forgetting that I've hung a map on the inside of it and can't peep out, I start to get annoyed as I scramble around to find the knob to unbolt the door.
Me (opening the door and speaking in an annoyed voice): Yes? What is it?
(I see a young woman on my step. She's wearing a long dark dress, and is hugging herself and bobbing up and down. I move my computer glasses around until I can focus, and recognize Marie Owen.)
Marie (squealing): Mom!
Me: Come in! It's chilly out there.
(I open the screen door, and she enters, then flings her arms around me.)
Marie: Oh Mom, Mom, you can't believe how happy I am.
Me (Trying to breathe within her tight grasp): I'm glad. Come sit down. What has you all excited?
Marie: I'm free of that brutish man! (She loosens her hold on me, then smiles brilliantly and sits on the chair I point to, bouncing a bit) You did that. You got your book about me to the readers, and now I'm out of his clutches.
Me: Mr. Thorne?
Marie (scoffing) Mister? He doesn't deserve the title. But it doesn't matter. He's gone now.
Me: I believe I know about that ending.
Marie: Yes. (She looks away briefly, then meets my gaze again.) My man is helping me forget that.
Me (starting to get over being grumpy as I feel the peace and joy radiating from her): Your man, huh?
Marie (suddenly shy): He's, he's the most wonderful man I ever met!
Me: You've changed your opinion, then?
Marie (giggling): Mom! He loves me. He suffered a mighty hard journey in order to find me. He never gave up, Mom. He came for me, and when he did, I was so frightened for him. (She starts to bite a nail.) He suffered more than the journey!
Me: He does care deeply for you.
Marie (her eyes lighting up): Yes. Thank you.
Me: For what?
Marie: For publishing the book at last.
Me: I'm sorry it took so long. You were in such distress when last you visited.
Marie: All that is over now, thanks to you.
Me: Do you love him?
Marie: What?
Me: Do you love him, or are you merely beholden to him?
Marie (She closes her eyes and takes in a slow, deep breath. I watch her, and when she lets out the air, she is smiling.) I love him.
Me (I nod)
Marie: At first, before I agreed to marry him, I worried that I didn't care for him, that he would smother me. Then it came to me, like a ray of sunshine through a cloud, that he was precisely the man I wanted. The man I wanted all along.
Me: Where is he?
Marie: He's out holdin' the horses. He's more shy than you know, considering.
Me: Considering what?
Marie: Considering we rousted a priest out of bed to have us a ceremony.
Me: A what? You don't mean--
Marie: Yes! The priest agreed that since we're not of his Catholic faith, we didn't need any delays to read banns or the like.
Me: How long ago did this happen?
Marie (suddenly very shy): Just now.
Me: When?
Marie: A few hours ago.
Me: You're kidding me! (I grin at her, maybe a bit too broadly) No wonder he's standing out in the cold.
Marie: Don't be a-teasin', Mom.
Me: I'm sorry. (I pause and look at this glowing creature I created.) I reckon you'd best be on your way. It's cruel to keep the man waiting.
Marie (standing): It was his idea to come here. He thanks you for publishin' the book.
Me (smiling as I rise to my feet): You go give him my love.
Marie (trying to keep her smile in check as she inches toward the door): I reckon not. At least, not tonight. He's only gettin' my love tonight. (She giggles.) I'll give him your love on another occasion.
Me: Butter.
Marie (stepping outside and turning to gaze at me): Exactly so.
And she's gone. I close the door slowly, feeling some of her glow myself. "Butter. Melting butter."
Spinster's Folly, Book 4 of "The Owen Family Saga," is available as an ebook and in print at online book sellers. Autographed copies available at http://marshaward.com.
Me (opening the door and speaking in an annoyed voice): Yes? What is it?
(I see a young woman on my step. She's wearing a long dark dress, and is hugging herself and bobbing up and down. I move my computer glasses around until I can focus, and recognize Marie Owen.)
Marie (squealing): Mom!
Me: Come in! It's chilly out there.
(I open the screen door, and she enters, then flings her arms around me.)
Marie: Oh Mom, Mom, you can't believe how happy I am.
Me (Trying to breathe within her tight grasp): I'm glad. Come sit down. What has you all excited?
Marie: I'm free of that brutish man! (She loosens her hold on me, then smiles brilliantly and sits on the chair I point to, bouncing a bit) You did that. You got your book about me to the readers, and now I'm out of his clutches.
Me: Mr. Thorne?
Marie (scoffing) Mister? He doesn't deserve the title. But it doesn't matter. He's gone now.
Me: I believe I know about that ending.
Marie: Yes. (She looks away briefly, then meets my gaze again.) My man is helping me forget that.
Me (starting to get over being grumpy as I feel the peace and joy radiating from her): Your man, huh?
Marie (suddenly shy): He's, he's the most wonderful man I ever met!
Me: You've changed your opinion, then?
Marie (giggling): Mom! He loves me. He suffered a mighty hard journey in order to find me. He never gave up, Mom. He came for me, and when he did, I was so frightened for him. (She starts to bite a nail.) He suffered more than the journey!
Me: He does care deeply for you.
Marie (her eyes lighting up): Yes. Thank you.
Me: For what?
Marie: For publishing the book at last.
Me: I'm sorry it took so long. You were in such distress when last you visited.
Marie: All that is over now, thanks to you.
Me: Do you love him?
Marie: What?
Me: Do you love him, or are you merely beholden to him?
Marie (She closes her eyes and takes in a slow, deep breath. I watch her, and when she lets out the air, she is smiling.) I love him.
Me (I nod)
Marie: At first, before I agreed to marry him, I worried that I didn't care for him, that he would smother me. Then it came to me, like a ray of sunshine through a cloud, that he was precisely the man I wanted. The man I wanted all along.
Me: Where is he?
Marie: He's out holdin' the horses. He's more shy than you know, considering.
Me: Considering what?
Marie: Considering we rousted a priest out of bed to have us a ceremony.
Me: A what? You don't mean--
Marie: Yes! The priest agreed that since we're not of his Catholic faith, we didn't need any delays to read banns or the like.
Me: How long ago did this happen?
Marie (suddenly very shy): Just now.
Me: When?
Marie: A few hours ago.
Me: You're kidding me! (I grin at her, maybe a bit too broadly) No wonder he's standing out in the cold.
Marie: Don't be a-teasin', Mom.
Me: I'm sorry. (I pause and look at this glowing creature I created.) I reckon you'd best be on your way. It's cruel to keep the man waiting.
Marie (standing): It was his idea to come here. He thanks you for publishin' the book.
Me (smiling as I rise to my feet): You go give him my love.
Marie (trying to keep her smile in check as she inches toward the door): I reckon not. At least, not tonight. He's only gettin' my love tonight. (She giggles.) I'll give him your love on another occasion.
Me: Butter.
Marie (stepping outside and turning to gaze at me): Exactly so.
And she's gone. I close the door slowly, feeling some of her glow myself. "Butter. Melting butter."
Spinster's Folly, Book 4 of "The Owen Family Saga," is available as an ebook and in print at online book sellers. Autographed copies available at http://marshaward.com.
Saturday, June 20, 2009
Those Crazy Characters
Welcome to the blog where I let the characters from my novels talk up a storm. I'm sure they will drop in from time to time to entertain you with tidbits about themselves and news of what's happening in their world.
Last year I had a chance to talk with some of those characters after they camped out on the Mogollon Rim, and I'll bring those posts over here from my "Writer in the Pines" blog. Then I'll add new posts as the voices in my head dictate.
Enjoy!
Last year I had a chance to talk with some of those characters after they camped out on the Mogollon Rim, and I'll bring those posts over here from my "Writer in the Pines" blog. Then I'll add new posts as the voices in my head dictate.
Enjoy!
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