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He stared at the paper until the lines of script began to wiggle before his eyes, pain surging from the part of his hair to his toenails. He knew he looked a fool with his mouth open, but if he was going to breathe again, the happenstance of his jaw having gone slack might help him drag in some air, if he could remember how that was done.
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Great description of a dumbfounded man!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jenna! :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat description!
ReplyDeleteI like Bill Henry! I picture him as being related to good old "John Henry" but without a hammer in his hand. LOL!
ReplyDeleteLOL! Bill's good-hearted and steadfast (both good qualities), so the similarities are there. As befitting every good character, Bill has his flaws, but his good traits overshadow his darker side.
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I wonder what's written on the paper that has him in such a turmolt
ReplyDeleteAh, that's an excellent question.
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