Saturday, March 31, 2012

Sweet Saturday Samples: A big brother's role

Welcome back to Sweet Saturday Samples! Since we looked at two of Marie's brothers a couple of weeks ago, I thought I'd slip in a scene of her and her eldest brother, Rulon, talking together in a piece from my forthcoming novel, Spinster's Folly.
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After she had eaten and cleaned up, Marie prepared her bed at the foot of a tree, and then sat on her quilt for a while, her back against the trunk. Rulon strolled over and squatted beside her.

"You all set here?" He picked at his teeth with a flayed willow twig.

"Yes sir. Almost as comfy as my bed at home." She hugged herself. "I reckon I'll sleep after a bit. I can't bring myself to close my eyes yet."

"It's a pretty night," he said, looking at the stars. When he looked at Marie again, he tilted his head to one side. "Are you sore, Sis? You've been in the saddle for a long stretch, and you're not used to the sort of work you've been doin' today."

Marie smiled wryly. "You caught me out, didn't you? I'm also burned and windblown and flybitten. I'll make a handsome prize for Tom Morgan."

"No, Sis," Rulon said, drawing out the initial vowel as he shook his head. "You're a beauty despite a tad bit of sunburn. Tom Morgan's a fool if he won't see that tomorrow."

Marie rolled her eyes. "Big brothers always say such dainty things."

"The truth ain't a dainty thing." Rulon smiled. "Granted I'm your big brother, and I might be a mite partial to you, but there's no denyin' you're a gem of a woman, Marie. You stand the competition on their noses, girl."

Marie couldn't help but laugh.

"There now." He patted her hand. "That's what I like to hear."

"Rulon, who do you reckon is my competition?"

"Just a figure of speech, Sis. There is no competition that stands up to you."

"There is no competition at all. I'm the only girl left single hereabouts." Marie ducked her head so Rulon wouldn't see hopelessness in her eyes.

He put two fingers under her chin, raised her face, and looked at her for a long time. "Marie. That is an unfortunate circumstance. You are worth more than any three girls back home. Don't forget that. Not ever."

Marie hoped the deepening darkness prevented Rulon from seeing the tears that suddenly caused her vision to swim. "That's sweet of you to say," she whispered, catching his hand. "No wonder Mary thinks the sun rises and sets on you."

Now Rulon ducked his head. "Go on!"

"I reckon I think that, too, big brother." She pushed him on the shoulder. "I'm sleepy now. You needn't watch over me tonight."

He touched her on the tip of her nose. "That's what big brothers are for." He got to his feet. "Good night, Sis."

"Good night, Rulon."
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12 comments:

  1. This is such a lovely scene. You've done a wonderful job of showing the love between brother and sister, as well as letting the reader know about Marie's self-doubt. Good job.

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    1. Thank you for visiting and commenting, Sandy!

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  2. This is very sweet. Lots of brothers wouldn't have responded this way.

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    1. That's true, Elaine. At least one of Marie's wouldn't, for sure.

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  3. Makes me wish I had a brother! I wonder why Marie doesn't see her own worth, but I'm guessing that's at the heart of the novel. Great scene. Very sweet.

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    1. Didn't I answer you, Jenna! Oh yeah, the power went off when I was doing so. Sorry!

      Thanks for coming over and commenting. I had three brothers, each with very different personalities. My relationship with each was different, partly to account for that, I suppose.

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  4. Aww. Yay for supportive big brothers.

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    1. Agreed, Donna. My big brother was somewhat limited in his abilities, due to a birth injury that could have been prevented had the attending nurse not panicked. He was very loving, though, and I always felt that warmth from him. He's on the other side now and I'm sure he's in full charge of his spiritual faculties.

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  5. I love it. :) Big brothers can be so much fun to write. ;)

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    1. I've certainly enjoyed portraying Rulon. He'll get the next book I write in this series, and we'll find out some of the experiences that molded him.

      Thanks for visiting my blog and commenting, Rachel.

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  6. I always enjoy your writing Marsha!

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    1. Thanks, Cindy! I appreciate you taking the time to stop by and comment.

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