Having Fun with the Characters

I worked on a bit of editing last night, getting one scene ready for a critique group, and filling out another on a second pass.

Marie got really angry, and it was kind of fun to see the steam building up and how she exhibited it. I knew that scene needed some tinkering on the action/reaction aspects, and I believe I finally got it right!

Whew!

Now I'm off to bed for a while (yes, I'm up late, not arising early to get kiddoes off to school).