tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post6443132672332461438..comments2023-10-29T04:39:09.676-07:00Comments on Writer in the Pines: Sweet Saturday Sample: Spinster's Folly againMarsha Wardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-81833889715505429122012-02-26T06:02:15.136-07:002012-02-26T06:02:15.136-07:00Now I need to know what scared her! Great sample ...Now I need to know what scared her! Great sample as always!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-16298402696969152452012-02-25T21:22:23.187-07:002012-02-25T21:22:23.187-07:00He's got a clear character voice. That's s...He's got a clear character voice. That's some good characterization.J. Gunnar Greyhttp://www.the1940mysterywriter.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-80726822100798305742012-02-25T18:57:00.604-07:002012-02-25T18:57:00.604-07:00"...his voice a bit rough around the edges, a..."...his voice a bit rough around the edges, as though he had forgotten how to use it to express tenderness..." Oh, how I LOVE this! Wonderful excerpt!Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-85366161948386883642012-02-25T16:21:17.486-07:002012-02-25T16:21:17.486-07:00You've done a wonderful job of giving Rod his ...You've done a wonderful job of giving Rod his own unique voice. Good writing.Sandy Nachlingerhttp://iousex.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-47130306684692926602012-02-25T15:18:31.966-07:002012-02-25T15:18:31.966-07:00So, what is she frightened of? I want to know. Goo...So, what is she frightened of? I want to know. Good snippet!Jean Joachim Bookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16614059778826802446noreply@blogger.com