tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post5900832136628365040..comments2023-10-29T04:39:09.676-07:00Comments on Writer in the Pines: Sweet Saturday Sample: Excerpt #3 from The Man from ShenandoahMarsha Wardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-54637862016069542752011-09-28T18:58:13.020-07:002011-09-28T18:58:13.020-07:00What a great idea to post samples! :-)What a great idea to post samples! :-)Heather Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11634399663804195312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-44451572379141245072011-09-26T21:11:11.072-07:002011-09-26T21:11:11.072-07:00Hi Marsha! Great job with the dialouge! It's...Hi Marsha! Great job with the dialouge! It's so real! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11657583544798915346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-57300032900937449872011-09-24T21:44:22.862-07:002011-09-24T21:44:22.862-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-71179506628200061822011-09-24T21:44:06.607-07:002011-09-24T21:44:06.607-07:00He made it home! I'm so glad. I was a little w...He made it home! I'm so glad. I was a little worried the last couple of weeks. This is a great story.<br /><br />Here's my sample: http://diannehartsocksalex.wordpress.com/sweet-saturday-samples-2/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-85572524973961883862011-09-24T21:17:22.256-07:002011-09-24T21:17:22.256-07:00Loved the fact her son had changed so much in the ...Loved the fact her son had changed so much in the time he'd been gone, she didn't recognize how he sat in the saddle. Great characterization before he even says a word.Trishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03232378093017812896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-29483640615854597212011-09-24T18:18:29.806-07:002011-09-24T18:18:29.806-07:00The exchange is so heartfelt it jumps from the pag...The exchange is so heartfelt it jumps from the pages and I felt like I was there watching it in person. Nice sample.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-12323326666708363522011-09-24T14:23:17.724-07:002011-09-24T14:23:17.724-07:00Oh, I like that one! Great set up for a tender mom...Oh, I like that one! Great set up for a tender moment.Candahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15867282872125340556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-57804452583971543772011-09-24T12:33:38.670-07:002011-09-24T12:33:38.670-07:00So glad he's home! I'm enjoying the story....So glad he's home! I'm enjoying the story.Patricia Kiyonohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14763838993363110626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-18554867298742729412011-09-24T11:25:25.996-07:002011-09-24T11:25:25.996-07:00Great scene and dialogueGreat scene and dialogueLindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716003019499843582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-65068172464815394662011-09-24T11:13:52.510-07:002011-09-24T11:13:52.510-07:00I went to Shiloh battlefield today because they ha...I went to Shiloh battlefield today because they having an artillery demo. Canons are loud and smoky!<br /><br />Glad Carl got to come home.Patricia Prestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04538067779006621088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-90613793067111694742011-09-24T10:42:14.795-07:002011-09-24T10:42:14.795-07:00Whew! Restored the missing paragraphs.
Thanks, Je...Whew! Restored the missing paragraphs.<br /><br />Thanks, Jennifer! I appreciate your warm praise.<br /><br />Welcome, Elaine! We have that in common: writing in that fearsome period. Thanks for visiting!Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-18929884012701444852011-09-24T10:29:14.547-07:002011-09-24T10:29:14.547-07:00This is just weird. Another week, another snafu at...This is just weird. Another week, another snafu at Blogger. Words are missing. I'll go put them back in, folks.<br /><br />I swear they were all there when I scheduled the post!Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-75783948590723329002011-09-24T08:18:43.854-07:002011-09-24T08:18:43.854-07:00I'm working on a book set right after the Civi...I'm working on a book set right after the Civil War. Good details.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-42541189834958349742011-09-24T05:17:04.847-07:002011-09-24T05:17:04.847-07:00Your work is very authentic. Great sample!Your work is very authentic. Great sample!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com