tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post5734022350307413894..comments2023-10-29T04:39:09.676-07:00Comments on Writer in the Pines: Sweet Saturday Samples: Something newMarsha Wardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-31282188708920115382012-05-12T20:00:38.558-07:002012-05-12T20:00:38.558-07:00Thanks, Donna. I swear I don't know where thes...Thanks, Donna. I swear I don't know where these ideas come from, but I'm grateful for them!Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-905145494100162272012-05-12T19:23:52.812-07:002012-05-12T19:23:52.812-07:00"the grit to be tender'. I love that!"the grit to be tender'. I love that!Donna K. Weaverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15763832177263927311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-19737556028435485782012-05-12T18:58:50.202-07:002012-05-12T18:58:50.202-07:00Thank you, Jennifer! I try.Thank you, Jennifer! I try.Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-78700002926238284432012-05-12T18:57:59.919-07:002012-05-12T18:57:59.919-07:00Thanks, Jenna. I'm working on the scene, but i...Thanks, Jenna. I'm working on the scene, but it's still coming out rough.Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-3921263351868575422012-05-12T18:25:41.908-07:002012-05-12T18:25:41.908-07:00As always, your dialogue is the BEST, Marsha! Love...As always, your dialogue is the BEST, Marsha! Love this.Jennifer Griffithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13073947223053099280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-75543564540348283322012-05-12T16:32:33.789-07:002012-05-12T16:32:33.789-07:00Their dialect is wonderfully done! And I got such...Their dialect is wonderfully done! And I got such a sense of what's at stake here to Bill. Can't wait for that next scene!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-21059211866276611362012-05-12T11:46:48.180-07:002012-05-12T11:46:48.180-07:00Thank you, Sandy and Lindsay. Now I have to write ...Thank you, Sandy and Lindsay. Now I have to write the scene following this one. It's going to be hard work getting it right.Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-24794997364735113452012-05-12T10:00:23.245-07:002012-05-12T10:00:23.245-07:00I love the dialogue between the two men.I love the dialogue between the two men.Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716003019499843582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-50061060466130813962012-05-12T08:54:12.075-07:002012-05-12T08:54:12.075-07:00Your dialogue is always so wonderful, and today...Your dialogue is always so wonderful, and today's excerpt is no exception. I can see and hear these cowboys discussing the girl. Good writing.Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.com