tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post3048514172574213981..comments2023-10-29T04:39:09.676-07:00Comments on Writer in the Pines: Sweet Saturday Samples - September 8, 2012Marsha Wardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-85480660950667433512012-09-09T17:18:02.417-07:002012-09-09T17:18:02.417-07:00Love the internal dialogue that's suggested!Love the internal dialogue that's suggested!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-59099203168283543462012-09-08T12:21:30.246-07:002012-09-08T12:21:30.246-07:00Yep, Bill was doing a bit of internal grousing him...Yep, Bill was doing a bit of internal grousing himself. Thanks for visiting, Leah!Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-68033932316688352082012-09-08T11:47:51.806-07:002012-09-08T11:47:51.806-07:00Thanks, Sandy. I appreciate your support. :-)Thanks, Sandy. I appreciate your support. :-)Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-41394301020424465222012-09-08T10:14:15.581-07:002012-09-08T10:14:15.581-07:00I like the "How was he supposed to know when ...I like the "How was he supposed to know when a man was going to fumble his load?" :)Leahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17725517477366290193noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-91814488695709858352012-09-08T08:58:18.672-07:002012-09-08T08:58:18.672-07:00I like the way you interspersed Bill's thought...I like the way you interspersed Bill's thoughts of Marie with his work. You did a great job of showing both. Good scene.Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.com