tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post1403370313392764495..comments2023-10-29T04:39:09.676-07:00Comments on Writer in the Pines: Sweet Saturday Sample - June 23, 2012Marsha Wardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-8275576592310867412012-06-25T00:31:05.283-07:002012-06-25T00:31:05.283-07:00Thanks for coming on over, Laurel-Rain. I apprecia...Thanks for coming on over, Laurel-Rain. I appreciate your comment, too.Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-48547425396127029672012-06-25T00:29:59.641-07:002012-06-25T00:29:59.641-07:00Thanks, Sandy. :-)Thanks, Sandy. :-)Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-15436790655871938882012-06-24T05:27:51.387-07:002012-06-24T05:27:51.387-07:00Intriguing cast of characters, with a funny anticl...Intriguing cast of characters, with a funny anticlimactic moment, thanks to the horse.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing...and for visiting my blog. I'll be watching for more!Laurel-Rain Snowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00101090217639410913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-91383013151905882732012-06-23T21:37:44.085-07:002012-06-23T21:37:44.085-07:00I love how you included the horse's manure in ...I love how you included the horse's manure in the scene. It adds realism and a bit of humor. Good writing.Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-67843483103064977192012-06-23T17:43:47.950-07:002012-06-23T17:43:47.950-07:00LOL! Right, Lindsay. Thanks for visiting and comme...LOL! Right, Lindsay. Thanks for visiting and commenting.Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-71243435432508792412012-06-23T17:42:48.210-07:002012-06-23T17:42:48.210-07:00Whew! I'm glad it works for you, Elaine. Thank...Whew! I'm glad it works for you, Elaine. Thanks!Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-59944108051289000512012-06-23T17:41:13.952-07:002012-06-23T17:41:13.952-07:00Oh good! Thanks, Sandra.Oh good! Thanks, Sandra.Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-3187506590229918392012-06-23T17:40:22.488-07:002012-06-23T17:40:22.488-07:00Yes, Bill is very unhappy. Thanks for visiting, Pa...Yes, Bill is very unhappy. Thanks for visiting, Patricia.Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-41967677487494898382012-06-23T16:13:13.220-07:002012-06-23T16:13:13.220-07:00Thank you, Jenna.Thank you, Jenna.Marsha Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15389060049107102815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-84964090026282790932012-06-23T16:07:36.018-07:002012-06-23T16:07:36.018-07:00There's nothing like the smell of horse manure...There's nothing like the smell of horse manure in the morning. Clears the sinuses right outLindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07716003019499843582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-86484729547107262602012-06-23T12:51:05.714-07:002012-06-23T12:51:05.714-07:00I could see it happening as I read your descriptio...I could see it happening as I read your description.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-20862195147604431222012-06-23T12:03:47.794-07:002012-06-23T12:03:47.794-07:00Your description of the "horse" action w...Your description of the "horse" action was so vivid that it made me wrinkle my nose! LOL.Sandra Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05246424098015549007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-13799046156520928882012-06-23T09:46:45.716-07:002012-06-23T09:46:45.716-07:00Yes, I think you did a good job with the descripti...Yes, I think you did a good job with the description. You can tell there are several people gathering and it may not be a pleasant experience for Bill.Patricia Prestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04538067779006621088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-31428247.post-49435964587039596932012-06-23T07:22:23.207-07:002012-06-23T07:22:23.207-07:00This sample certainly does give the impression of ...This sample certainly does give the impression of a lot going on. Very vivid description of all the parts of the search party gathering. Nice job.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.com